Tuesday, 21 June 2016

A short fantasy "In a foreign Land"

  Hi Everyone,
  Had brief inspiration last night and sat a wrote this very brief, story, caption to a picture I was sent a while ago.
  It's not very long, more a swift out pouring. However I am writing a longer story, less about feminisation and more in the mold of my earlier fetish work.
  Anyway, hope this tickles the spot for you.
XXXX
Andy


In A Foreign Land

   Each woman graceful and beautiful bowed as the tall man, suited and brief cased passed by. The ambassador turned. “Please your majesty if you hear of anything please contact the embassy"
 After the car had driven from view along the long dusty drive way the woman tuned to the young beauty beside her. She paused and smiled.
“You said nothing Child, you could have spoken up and be travelling home now, but you did not”.
  The stunning woman,exotic and sensual stroked a long deeply glossed finger across the young beauties deeply rouged cheek.
  “It seems so long now,  you were so wet and so helpless beside the road, how you were so happy to come under my roof, into my palace. How shy you were when we first presented our dry clothes. They were like nothing you had ever seen before. Outfits befitting a palace of femininity. 
  We recall how you were so confused and unsure when my maidens bathed and dressed you, how you were consumed by shame and embarrassment as my they painted your pretty face, your pretty, pretty wide eyed face, their skill and magic revealing, with a myriad of colours and shades, the sensual  femininity beneath. 
And we recall the look on your face as our mirrored walls revealed to you your future, My maidens in their gowns of gold and were beautiful beside you, but you Child, you were something more, something special, something new.

  Your limbs seemed longer, your skin seemed darker and warmer, enriched with the honey from my gardens. Your hair was thinker and glossier and your face, your new face was softer, lips fuller, eyes wider, The young man beside the road, the sodden, bedraggled helpless boy had gone and in our palace of femininity he had been reborn, a vision, a wonder and in time, bathed in the warmth of our love, the heat our desire, and the sweat of our bodies will become a new Goddess"
  The young beauty remained still, as ever the Princesses words meant nothing to him, they were a language he did not understand and had not understood as they offered him shelter from that storm, But none of that mattered now, for he was no longer the young man, the boy, wet and lost beside the road in a foreign land, far from home, now in his rescuers hands he had become a glistening bejeweled vision of utter femininity and in their beds he would become so much more 


XXX
Andy

17 comments:

  1. Yes, this does tickle the spot for me! Still needs a little re-editing in a couple of places, but overall - lovely! A beautiful story to go with a beautiful picture. Thank you, Andy, for sharing it with us.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hi, So glad your spot has been tickled and you are right a touch of editing would improve the read.I like the idea of all this happening without Andy being able to understand a word of ehat they say. You can imagine him sitting in the plush Palace as they stand right in front of him discussing how he has no idea what is about to happen to him. Saying openly they will transform him into a beautiful woman, whilst he just sits there and smiles unknowingly.
      My friends in Lyon gave me the Bollywood treatment a few times with a really deep fake tan and if i do say so myself I looked pretty darn good.
      Thanks Honey
      XXX

      Delete
    2. I do so agree. Not being able to understand what they're saying and planning adds an extra frisson to the transformation.

      'Bollywood' is so glamorous and gorgeous (especially the jewelry)! I remember Chrsteen once did a Bollywood picture of Chris. I would have loved to have seen a picture of your makeover; I'm sure others would as well.

      Delete
    3. Hi
      I have always thought that about a language barrier, Andys hosts would have been so kind, smiling and welcoming, gentle and caring and Andy would have felt safe to go along with them, not realizing til it was too late just what their plans were.
      Big hugs
      XX

      Delete
    4. My Favourites in Bollywood are Ashwiarya Rai, Priyanka Chopra and Katrina Kaif, I nearly had a fit one day watching one of her films and suddenly she is in this tiny Atsuko Kudo Latex dress.
      Bongggg!!!!

      Delete
    5. This comment has been removed by the author.

      Delete
    6. Well quite:
      https://uk.pinterest.com/pin/360639882635511657/
      but also
      https://uk.pinterest.com/pin/265642077994217643/
      http://www.atsukokudo.com/blog/2014/06/atsuko-kudo-in-bollywood-blockbuster/

      Delete
  2. This is truly wonderful. Simple, economical but so much from the heart. A lost soul who is rescued and helped. Like a lady spotting a similar lost soul in a coffee shop all those years ago.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Oh S, I am not sure I was such a lost soul by then, but such sweet sentiments
      XXXX

      Delete
  3. Well done Andy
    You have created a little tease for us. A nice beginning, or is it an interlude? Have the servants been instructed to not teach him any of their language?
    Looking forward to seeing the photos or your transformation in a caption someday.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hi Lee
      I have no doubt in time Andy will learn their language, but that will come.
      As for me, I have never had a single photo take. The Tan was a bit of a problem to remove and I had to go to work next day still rather darker than usual and had to explain it away as a fancy dress thing, i Think. I told our Stallion friend above it at the time. But it also help lead me towards the relationship I am in now.
      You are a gem Lee
      XXX

      Delete
  4. From Sweet Sissy Stevie.

    Exquisite. The lucky boy transformed into a beautiful maiden, permanently wrapped in perfumed silk, satin and lace, made-up and presented to perfection at all times, dripping with jewels and on his way to becoming a goddess. More please

    lots of love and XXXXX

    Stevie

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you Stevie your wonderful comments are an inspiration for me t create more little tales. Bless you
      Big Hugs
      XXXX

      Delete
  5. Short, but oh so sweet, Dear Andy! I find your imagination has again given us a delicious confection. Imagine being feminized by gorgeous maidens and mistresses without understanding a word, but fully realizing and accepting their attentions. How inspiring! You've conveyed so much in such a short story; and the illustration is perfection indeed! Andy's expression suggests he's looking forward to his feminine role as bed partner to these lovely ladies. Thanks for sharing your fantasies with us!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hi Honey
      Thank you so so much, I am delighted my little tale has touched peoples hearts and pricked their imaginations. You add so much to my images and words with your comments. I am so happy we share the same feelings.
      XXXX
      Andy

      Delete
  6. When this young beauty gets into the beds of his hosts, they can start writing a new Kama Sutra while working out each entry with his assistence. Mmmmm.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Oh what a wonderfully erotic image that makes. Thanks honey
      XXX

      Delete